In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
A recently published study has illustrated that the average weight of people is rising and it has significantly lowered their health and fitness level. This essay considers sedentary life style and evolving eating habits the causative factors of this problem. It can be managed by raising awareness and by building more sports facilities.
Technological advances have negatively impacted our lifestyles. People are now for most part of the day on their office desks or in front of their computer screens, which deteriorates their physical well being by making overweight because of negligible physical activity.As an illustration, result of a scientific study showed that 40% of workers in corporate sector are overweight while 6% are obese.
The shift in eating practices have also affected health badly. People are opting for fast foods and fried items rather than fresh vegetables and dairy products, as a result of which their weight increases and their fitness level declines. For instance, A search study showed that most of the ingredients of fast food are artificially synthesised and can cause obesity also can result in chronic diseases like diabetes.
These growing problems of over weighing and lowering health status can be addressed by making people understand the causes of them and by educating people regarding their solutions and prevention. This is exemplified by a compaign launched in New Delhi India that educate office workers and urge them to exercise regularly.
Governments can also provide solution by encouraging people to exercise by building facilities like jogging tracks, sport complexes, and gymnasia etc. For example , 114 sports grounds of different scale recently built by government of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa are used by 0.5 million people every month.
In conclusion, in general the average weight of the people are on the rise, affecting their health. This essay believes that sedentary living patterns and bad eating habits are mainly responsible for this. This can be coped affectively by elevating the level of knowledge about this issue and by providing people with more facilities to exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43113772455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77984663928 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8543848198 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.933333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217244063597 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076566953774 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792975058501 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114601144127 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507131509336 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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