In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.
The average weight of individuals in numerous nations is uplifting and their health and fitness' levels are dropping. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain contributing factors of the issue and also put forward a number of remedial measures in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, there are two causative factors of this tribulation. First and foremost, it, which was happened to worker, is able to be caused by the full-time work schedule of people, which in the end, making them do not have time to cook healthy food and are not capable of exercising in order to keep their having a healthy life and a fit body. Second but not less crucial, it, moreover, is caused by the increasing number of fast food restaurant which is available, affordable-price and easy to find.
In accordance with the solution, there are two counter measures for resolving this difficulty. The government, firstly, is supposed to create a regulation for every company to decrease the work hours of their employment in order to render an opportunity for workers to alter their negative lifestyles into positive lifestyles. Secondly, the authority, additionally, has to create a rule of minimization the product of fast food restaurant which will confer a bad impact to human health.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that in order to vary the negative habit of those masses, the bureaucrats, who led in all those states, have to provide an improved regulation which concerned about a healthy life. Thus, after their authority made this rule, all people have to obey it in order to bestow them a better lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00364963504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86977605001 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4914043481 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139136385653 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559908786787 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617514725364 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823108318061 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376194801541 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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