A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
An increasing number of people tend to think that faunas are not supposed to be exploited by individuals and they should be treated well by the same rights as humans. Nevertheless, others feel that animals have to be employed in order to fulfil their several necessaries such as the utilization for research and food. In accordance with these arguments, this essay will explain both points of view and put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the issue, I do appreciate to the statement which believed that faunas have to be treated well as well. Nonetheless, I tend to think that the existence of animal itself is to assist people fulfilling their various needs. Therefore, I strongly agree to this statement. However, we, perhaps, have to change numerous negative behaviour of people to animal itself, particularly, it happened in several states.
In accordance with the arguments above, there are two behaviours of individuals to fauna that they need to alter. Human, first and foremost, has to take care of the existence of animals by letting them to stay at our home, in particular, a wild animal that does not have any cared-taker. Second but not less crucial, we, furthermore, have to render them a proper food. According to proper food itself, it does not mean that we have to purchase an expensive food, nevertheless, we merely need to purchase and bestow a deserved food for them.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that by mixing some behaviours of these two arguments are the best decision to be done. Thus, in order to make it happen, we have to control all behaviours of human to animal starting from our self and afterwards, monitor others behaviour to them as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in particular, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88054607509 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80507873801 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1546644752 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317540958692 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100375699118 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837100172955 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181599315284 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797948661413 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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