In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the last few decades, many countries have been facing the rising number of overweight people and the reduction of their health and fitness considerably. this essay will examine the main causes of this problem and will presume several measures that could be taken to tackle this issue.
The foremost causes of increasing levels of obese people are a sedentary lifestyle and poor dietary habits in our day-to-day lives. Nowadays more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, prefer to work in offices, were little physical activity is required as well as adults and their children relax by watching television rather than doing outdoor sports leading to gain of weight. At the same time, a plethora of inhabitants have opted to eat unhealthy meals namely fast food or prepared meals, which are cheap to buy, however, contain a lot of sugar and salt, in other words, rich in calorie. For example, around 50% of the population in Europe suffer from obesity arise from disordered eating.
A couple of possible key solutions to this tremendous trouble are awareness of people about risks associated with weight gain and regular exercise. To be more precise, educating people about massive health problems such as diabetes and heart diseases that could stem from poor diet and an inactive lifestyle. In addition, this issue might be addressed by promoting physical activity during breaks at work time. if people eat well-balanced meals and exercise at least two times per week, these health issues of obesity could be tackled.
In conclusion, if these measures are taken, countries will not suffer from increasing levels of overweight people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14074074074 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49999725651 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6533832805 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214304874853 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759625360688 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459178841803 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13155271844 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256716575537 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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