There is increasing concern over children obesity in communities, which affect negatively in the development of society due to the fact that they are the future generations of a nation. Therefore, I partly agree with the idea that the government should be responsible to solve this problem.
One of the main drawbacks of being overweight is that it causes numerous serious diseases like diabetes and hypertension, which may shorten an individual’s lives and diminish the future nation human resources. Therefore, the government play a crucial role in mitigating this problem. In my opinion, the authority should adjust the nation budget to promote a healthy diet. In addition, a more stringent policy over the number of fat ingredients in food and drink products should be conducted.
On the other hand, parents and schools are also liable for their children’s good health. Firstly, with the advancement of technology, most children hobbies are playing video games and watching television which leads to a sedentary lifestyle. In addition, to satisfy the high expectation from their parents, a child is required to allocate more time with private tutors. As a result, they become lazy or have less time to participate in outdoor activities such as playing sports and doing exercise. Therefore, to solve this, besides some imperative subjects such as math and science, schools should engage children in physical exercises. Meanwhile, parents should spend more time to supervise their children’s diet carefully and adjust their children’s schedule to balance between physical and mental education.
In conclusion, parents, schools and government all play a crucial role in a healthy lifestyle of children. The healthier the young generation being the wealthier the country is.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51263537906 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05484710996 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0628781027 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220805074019 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753037507101 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786574852085 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129895574451 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456912868249 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.