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In some countries, the cost of using public transport is rapidly increasing. Causes and solutions.

It is said that in some nations in the world, there is a significant increase in the cost of using public transport. In this essay, I will discuss in details about the reasons behind this phenomenon and then offer some feasible measures to it.
There are a number of factors responsible for the increase in public transport fares Chief among these is that fossil fuels are more expensive, thereby forcing companies to increase their prices to cover the expenses. The situation is even worse now that natural resources are slowly depleting and therefore public transport systems would most likely experience another price hike. Another reason is that with an increase in the number of people who use public transport, many transport enterprises need to invest more money in upgrading the customer services so as to ensure commuters’ experience and comfort.Hence, they have to recruit more employees , thus having to increase prices in order to pay their salaries.
The government and the companies, nevertheless, can help to tackle the situation. First and foremost, the government should allocate financial subsidiaries to the public transport system (,) thereby helping companies to pay less money for fuel. This means that the cost of using public transport can decrease. The second possible measure is that companies can encourage commuters to use public transport by offering vouchers and loyalty programs. For instance, in Japan, citizens can enjoy cheaper bus rides if they purchase monthly tickets or recycle plastic bottles that reward them with vouchers.
In conclusion, there are many factors leading to a dramatic increase in the cost of using public transport such as the cost of fuel and service upgrade . However, the government and companies can join forces to mitigate the situation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...overnment and companies can join forces to mitigate the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3006993007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73593694912 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0398200232 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328374627886 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140662758447 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132994766685 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219214068032 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362669799959 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as

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