In this day and age, the disparity between infants and their parents in terms of age is more significant than ever. Despite having foreseen drawbacks, the advantages of having a child in a later phase of life are undeniably conducive to the kids development. This essay will outline both downsides and benefits of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, the later women labor a child, the more tendency of infant disability they have to countenance. In specific, the accumulation of toxin during their life will substantially increase the rate of disorder in their pregnancy. For instance, down syndrome is an age-related disorder that the mother entirely hold accountable for, especially those having maternity after 40 years olds. Moreover, it is the generation gap that amplifies the barriers in parenthood owing to incompatible lifestyle and perception between children and their parents. The greater the age disparity is, the less interaction family members may have with one another.
On the other hand, older parents are more likely to have a stable financial status. In particular, their material foundation are sufficient for raising their offsprings and provide them with the best opportunity in education, social life and daily necessity. That is to say, tuition fees of universities has become more and more exorbitant, having a financial support from parents is a privilege which creates a momentum, a head start for a triumphant future to come. Besides, parents having a sustainable income have more time for their kids owing to their priority is probably their children’s needs not money. In contrast, those who struggle with daily expenditure and work from nine to five are unlikely to give their kids enough comfort and attention.
It therefore can be concluded that, although there are undoubtedly setbacks regarding age-related risks and cross-generation barrier, kids having older parents can derive various privilege from their family financial and mental support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...of life are undeniably conducive to the kids development. This essay will outline bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, in particular, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40514469453 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91917500274 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.109788816 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942842280962 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378757398037 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458983054753 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668832465908 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309627187049 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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