Is mental strength important for success in sport or is it more important to be strong and fit for success in sport? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A controversy debate was brought up about whether or not physical strength eclipses the role of mental capacity in the pursuit of a triumphant sports career. Both sides of the issue will be discussed to clarify my opinion that a successful athlete needs to have both of these essential attributes.
For the most part, physical strength is of paramount importance in sports for a host of rationales. To achieve the final goal, it is crucial for sport players to exert themselves in extreme training programs which requires a durability. For instance, only the most enduring runners can be able to finish a 100-kilometer run and hopefully to reach the trophy. Moreover, recovering from a traumatic injury may demand certain physical strength and efforts that only a powerful and diligent individual can succeed.
On top of that, it takes concentration and gumption attain a decorated athletic career. In specific, mental capacity holds accountable for having a strong will and keeping a cool head. It is common that many sportsmen relinquish their passion owing to the frustration they countenance during the prolonged journey to achieve the final goal. The validated athletes who rewritten world records are those having the strongest will and determination to pursue a path that could be full of pains and temptations. Having to perform their best in front of millions of audiences and the high anticipation of admirers is immensely stressful. A prominent instance is that a soccer player may have to withstand the distraction from the noisy crowd to make a goal in the ultimate penalty shot is a mental game itself.
It therefore can be concluded that the physical and mental credentials are equitably imperative to achieve triumph in sports tournaments when one’s strength and concentration are being challenged.
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and concentration are being challenged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23890784983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95893217544 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2941758765 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284136156786 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872904546387 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893414966266 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162354180186 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666215183755 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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