The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from schools." To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?
Some advocate the view that schooling no longer takes the crucial role in one’s education with the emphasis on knowledge that can be learnt and passed down within their family. I am completely disagree with that notion for the fact that academic system is of paramount importance for a person’s foundation.
For the most part, conventional education can provide students with some of the most basic knowledge that is fundamental. Although the institutions’ curriculum and lecturers are unable to convey everything a pupil need to success in life, a clear vision and definition about life and moral acquisition is what they likely to acquire in order to become a capable human being. A prominent instance is that in mathematics, students are given the lesson about some arithmetic, formulas; however, more importantly, teachers may motivate their pupils to find the creativity lies behind the numbers and even how a math equation can help human get to the Moon. Furthermore, a decorated academic profile can raise one’s likelihood to achieve an adequate position in workplace as well as the opportunity to be promoted.
On top of that, being educated within domestic environment requires a supportive and intellectual family which is not something everyone has. In contrary, one can have the autonomy to have a better grip of the future career by enrolling particular schools for the fact that government offers free courses and subsidy for citizens in need. As can be seen, there are many living examples that earn high social hierarchy from receiving an appropriate schooling, despite having a violent or abandoned childhood which actually restrained their development. Moreover, the facts and information students acquire at institutions are standard and similar throughout the globe, while that from other people or passed down through generations might contain some distortions.
In conclusion, the exposure from outside schools regarding skills and experiences are still taken into account of one’s success but the pivotal role of educational system is an essential factor to enhance their capability and accomplishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Emphasis
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...wn within their family. I am completely disagree with that notion for the fact that acad...
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Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...t institutions are standard and similar through out the globe, while that from other people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45425867508 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00317114223 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0097788174 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.181818182 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112897226849 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396696088331 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314625190791 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666487910098 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277802389085 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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