some countries encourage teenagers to have part job and see it as a good thing and others disagree. give your opinion and discuss both views.
Many countries used to succeed that, to allow adolescence to do some jobs during their free time or casual time. While, people who disagree this practice because, which may affect their studies regarding tiredness and lack of concentration. However, in my opinion it is a good experience for the adolescence such as, learn innovative ideas and to prepare themselves as the advantages of self earnings and savings for the future and even for the tuition fees.
On the one hand, youth are the corner stone of any countries. Encourage them to do some kind of jobs during their young age may lead to nation forthcoming era to be success in terms of financial and creative thinking. Teenagers who done part time jobs may feel the difficulty of getting money and which may help them to develop innovative ideas and learn to ingenious capacity to overcome financial crisis in life time. Furthermore, spare time jobs helps many immigrants to search affordable course as well as payment for their studies even if they have student visa. For example, some European countries are offering novel courses and stay back services who is willing to do casual jobs in their student period.
On the other hand, lack of time for rest and relax may reflect on studies and health. People who oppose free time job explain that is exhaust and stress may alter students capability to attention on syllabus and mental functions. Moreover, some parents think that is their responsibility to give tuition fees and young age is time for enjoyment and just to behave like a free bird. For instance, in India many orthodox families does not like their children to encourage with work during their student period.
To conclude, in my perspective, part time job is a perfect idea to encourage teenagers to participate nations financial area and enhance invisible knowledge in the age of adolescent irrespective of minor fatigue and liability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64666653547 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0525812163 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147841137534 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539257134417 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334008605895 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096762121081 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239783404316 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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