In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and go into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
People differ greatly in their views about relocating the site of enterprises from the inner cities to rural places. While it is believed that this trend is associated with a few drawbacks, I firmly contend that the benefits are far significant.
There are two compelling reasons as to why some people believe that moving industrial companies out of the central cities into the countryside is disadvantageous in some ways. First and foremost, the capital which is the most important to their development can be damaged immediately. An excellent explanation is that the businesses may have to spend a huge amount of money on reconstructing factories and administrative offices in new locations, which leads to a decreasing in their revenue in other key fields such as advertising, improving the quality of production systems. Furthermore, if the moving distance is large, citizens in the cities may suffer from losing their jobs or work-life unbalance. To explain, they have to spend more time on commuting to work, this results in increased stress after working time.
However, I am convinced that there are more advantages to the relocation firms to regional destinations. The primary reason is that this activity restricts many serious environmental degradations in the center of the cities. This is because, although there are many resources are culprits to environmental issues, the pollution stemming from factory emissions and the disposal of industrial waste is considerable. In addition, more great job opportunities which are often less in the countryside than in big cities are created for people living in rural areas. They, as consequence, may not only do earn more money to improve the quality of their life but they also can enhance some working skills such as teamwork, communication or time management skills.
To sum up, although promoting industrial companies move out of the cities into countryside is disadvantageous because of some causes, such as their profit-damaging or the loss of citizens’ jobs, I strongly believe that the merits of this policy are greater, including protecting the environment in the inner cities and bringing more jobs to regional residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, as to, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36182336182 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14601905548 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1839684586 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.428571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187190053922 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569200328878 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076769169047 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902705362895 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07249817871 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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