In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and go into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Relocating the site of enterprises from the inner cities to rural places remains a source of controversy in modern society. While it is believed that this trend is associated with a few drawbacks, I firmly contend that the benefits are far significant.
There are two strong reasons as to why some people agree that moving industrial companies out of the central cities into countryside is disadvantageous in some ways. Firstly, the capital which is the most important to the their development can be damaged immediately. An exellent explanation is that the businesses may have to spend a huge amount of money on reconstructing factories and administrative offices in new locations, which leads to a decreasing in their revenue in other key fields such as advertising, improving the quality of production systems. Secondly, if the moving distance is large, citizens in the cities may suffer from losing their jobs or work-life unbalance. To explain, they have to spend more time on commuting to work, this results in increasing stress after working time.
However, I extremely claim that there are more advantages to the relocation firms to regional destinations. The primary reason is that this activity help restrict many serious environmental degradation in the centre of the cities. This is because, although there are many recources are conductive to environmental issues, the pollution stemming from factory emissions and the disposal of industrial waste are considerable. In addition, more great job opportunities which are often less in countryside than in a big cities are created for people living in rural areas. They, as consequence, may not only do earn more money to improve the quality of their life, but they also can enhance some working skills as team work, communication or time management skills.
In conclusion, although promoting industrial companies move out of the cities into countryside is disadvantagenous because of some causes, such as their profit demaging or the loss of citizens’ jobs, I strongly believe that the merits of this policy are greater, including protecting environment in the inner cities and bringing more jobs to regional residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... capital which is the most important to the their development can be damaged immediately....
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
...often less in countryside than in a big cities are created for people living in rural ...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y believe that the merits of this policy are greater, including protecting enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32947976879 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11231286392 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9984428367 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.846153846 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185102994699 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594608561042 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750111419925 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106863742132 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560532901229 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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