Some Countries have legal age at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's fast-paced world some people reckon that having a legal age at which people can drink is critically important, whereas others consider it does not have any benefits. From my perspective, launching rules in terms of drinking would be beneficial in a countless way and In the forthcoming paragraphs I will try to elaborate on my view.
To commence with, today a mainstream of youngsters are getting addicted to drinking from early age due to their parents lack of attention. In order to decrease this rate legislating a drinking age can be highly advantageous. The particular reason for this circumstance is that juveniles start not to drink alcohol not to pay a fine or be penalized. Moreover, this method assists to improve overall health jof public, because alcoholic drinks harm human's well-being detrimentally.
On the other hand, some people who are utterly obsessed with alcohols cannot get rid of their habit. In other words, they perpetuate to destroy their health by coming down with diabets, the cancer of liver and lungs and so on. According to some researchers a bottle of vodka shrinks overall life expectancy of human beings for hours.
To sum up everything that has been stated so far, I believe that launching rules about drinking age can have sheer advantage not only for adults, but as well the young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9730941704 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77509282363 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67264573991 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0888294711 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.9 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227873807266 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838834829866 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902740071687 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138747586025 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793699009926 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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