some people think that hosting and international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many people believe that initiating international events such as sports competitions may bring considerable damage to the host country. However, others refute this by noting the benefits of such events to the economy and to the individual. Both sides have some valid opinions which will be futher discussed in this essay.
According to some opinions, hosting events which are internationally held requires a great deal of money. There is a likelihood that such burden falls into the bills of the local taxpayers. This may deteriorate the lives of many people who are barely making it through each day. Futhermore, such events may also be culturally damaging. Hordes of people marching through the streets may not take control of their action, especially, if they are under the influence of alcohol. Besides, conflicts may arise between the supporters of winners and loser groups which may influence innocent local people.
On the contrary, those who side with the benefits of international sports competitions to the host country express sound reasons for their support.
First of all, such events help countries expand their prominance by advertising the unique nature of their country and recreational places so as to entice many tourists to the country. Expenditure of tourism is proven to be one of the successful ways to the sound economy. Moreover, guests coming to the country during such events may not always behave violent and immature towards locals. There might be civilized people who come with the intention of learning about the culture and local life, make friendship with the citizens of the host country. This may help local residents to broaden their outlook and might prosper intercultural relationship.
To conclude, conducting international sports competitions is not always as damaging as some may believe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, as to, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80915777765 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3901991349 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213466542213 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071441772455 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614708941552 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138284394264 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466994950322 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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