Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?
In the current contemporary world, a minority of countries nowadays tend to import a trinormous amount of food from other parts of the world. Although this trend bring a several huge benefits to the importer and exporter, it still consist outweight disavantages. The following essay will give my opinion to the notion above.
On the one hand, import food from other countries will have a substantial impact on the development of a country. For instance, citizens in countries who import severals foreigein products can have a more enjoy new tastes and have a more richness daily meal. Moreover, people can increase there knowledge and have a wider view about other ethics daily meal and their lifestyle. Hence, individuals could increase their health and have a plethora of breakthrough in choosing ingredients for their daily meals. Furthermore, export and import food’ products will grow the amount of companies in food industry. As a result, this can help the indivisuals in countries with low living standard have more opportunity to get a stable job and reduce poverty rate
On the other hand, importing foods from distances countries still exist several outweighs that has not been solved yet. In particularly, there are many companies that still import products that from unknown food supply sources due to the cheap prices. Thus, although this has a negligible impact on the food industry but it will play a essenstial role in decreasing human’ health. In general, take Vietnam as an example, every year according to Vietnam Ministry of Health almost half of million of inhabitants go to the hospital due to food poisoning and using food of unknown origin. Nevertheless, the issue can be easily solve by level the security and impose more food safety laws.
In conclusion, import and consuming other foods and products from distance countries will not only develop the food industry but also have a positive impact on the country’ civilization and industrialization
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...lthough this trend bring a several huge benefits to the importer and exporter, it still ...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
... to the importer and exporter, it still consist outweight disavantages. The following e...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t on the food industry but it will play a essenstial role in decreasing human’ he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20249221184 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80570024814 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3415931158 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323598661956 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118933197992 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105186423882 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2263637472 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638176231805 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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