Nowadays more people have started to consume more fast food than homemade food because ordering and buying food easier than prepairs it. As for the government decision about to impose a higher tax on fast food, I believe that everyone has the right to act as he pleases, or government should to find another way to solve this problem
But fast foods help people save their time, for example people's who works in offices are given little time for their lunch break so they will come to eat fast food ,in this regard they will save time and be full.
At the same time fast foods are quite cheap, and many people can buy fast foods.
Restaurants are more comfortable , quiet and clean.
During or after walks we can sit , relax and enjoy food
I think government should note more attention to hygiene and sanitation., if they want there to be no diseases
But there are disadvantages as we know, because eating fast foods people become overweight. If you regularly eat fries and hot dogs, then after a few months people develop various diseases, for example gastritis, cancer an so on and we can also say that the low price not always plus ,composition fast foods there are a lot of bad products.
I am personally against taxes instead of this government can give information about proper nutrition, government should apply others strategies so as not to face this problems . Healthy lifestyle with medical conditions and therefore should not for prevention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, as for, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85317460317 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46078353254 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.677353013 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.875 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311527696812 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124194376594 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650652231107 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119675242008 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810497173214 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 9.78957915832 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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