In the modern world, the invention of fast food has revolutionized the food industry. The fast food chains are able to prepare and serve food quickly. People tend to opt for fast food mainly due to its easy accessibility and cost effectiveness. But prolonged consumption of fast food has led to the decline of the health of numerous people in a few countries. The government imposes a certain tax on fast food and I believe it should impose a higher tax so that people will not choose to eat fast food over home cooked meals.
There are certain benefits we go to a restaurant or a fast food chain. The food is prepared in less than 20 minutes which helps people with a tight schedule to grab a meal quickly and continue with their daily tasks. Fast food is sold for less price in such a way that people from all financial backgrounds can afford it. Though fast food is delicious and cheap, It has detrimental effects on health. Deep fried foods increase cholesterol levels in the body which can lead to several health ailments.
The Indian government in order to curb the spread of fast food increased the taxes levied on fast food to 18% of the total bill. This change was opposed strongly by the general public since they had to pay a lot of tax for a meal. The government later amended the law to alter the tax on food to 5%. In the duration where the tax imposed on fast food was high, almost 1/5 of the total cost, many of my friends and family chose to eat home cooked meals. People started adopting better food habits and reduced the consumption of fast food.
In conclusion, people opt for fast food because it’s cost effective and easy to access fast food restaurants. The tax levied by the government on fast food will impact the food habits of many individuals and it is necessary to impose a fairly high tax on fast food so that the people don't prefer to eat them often.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...igh tax on fast food so that the people dont prefer to eat them often.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47398843931 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41695924757 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505780346821 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1970345211 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0588235294 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.29411764706 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388057778249 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16085634238 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584440653149 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287199133834 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361999572925 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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