The question states that some people often continue to work in the same organization for many years and few others prefer to change their organizations from time to time. There are advantages and disadvantages to both views. The individual is responsible for making the decision of whether to continue working for the same company or to move to a different one. I believe that either way could be beneficial to an individual.
Most people stay in the same role because they like the work and the problems they solve are challenging enough which keeps them engaged during their work hours. Some might stay in job roles that offer better pay so that they can afford a better lifestyle. An individual might choose to continue in the same organization out of loyalty as many companies offer amenities and good benefits which can persuade an employee to stay in the same organization. Personally, I have been working in the same organization for the past 15 months. I work in the IT domain mainly focused on retail analytics and Data Science. The reason I chose to remain with the company is due to the fact that the work challenges me every day and keeps me engaged.
The other side of the argument is also a valid statement. People who intend to move from one company to the other are often looking for new opportunities. Certain individuals could have reached their saturation point and cannot continue to work in the same role. This could be another reason why individuals jump ship. But mostly, people change their job roles because they are seeking better opportunities and increased pay. New opportunities could benefit an individual and aid them in learning new skills which can help them to advance higher up the ranks. People could also relocate to new cities and hence would change their companies.
In conclusion, People often choose a job that is relevant to their previous education. Hence they might stay in a company during their entire work life. They can also choose to change the organization when they are seeking new opportunities. I believe that a person can choose either option based on their preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ation for the past 15 months. I work in the IT domain mainly focused on retail analyti...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s relevant to their previous education. Hence they might stay in a company during the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89226519337 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679558011 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477900552486 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8905668572 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274322046676 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863650887411 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731595737858 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184508682915 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706372279515 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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