Traffic has create so many problem on road.
Do you think that problem should stop at society level and at individual level.
In this modernization era, everyone us their own vehicle move one place to another place for any purposes while this vehicles are creating numerous traffic on the road that generate plethora of problems in every nations in the world. That predicament can be curbed with the help of society level and individual level. Here, I would examine the both views in further paragraph before reaching conclusion.
To begin with, First and foremost, traffic create several problems in the society level such as accident problems, death issue and injury problems so on. Moreover, in whole the world the vast usage of modes of transport. Secondly, no one have time to go slowly every one in hurry that's why the reason is accident.However vehicles are creating a lot of pollution and generate toxic gases that are harmful for human health.
Moving further, society can be enrolled to curb this problem Firstly, they should organize some concerts of traffic on roads and with the help of speech people can be encourage to less use of private vehicle that use more public modes. Moreover, at society level, they also launch some buses for public. With the help of these transport traffic can be reduced.
At individual level, they play a prominent role to reduce the traffic, Firstly, with the help of car pooling they also go one place to another place while the government should be launched online cabs facilities for everyone take benefit from these facilities, For instance, in a city if someone make a parking place and that is too cheap chargeable for park their vehicles that can also reduce the traffic.
To recapitulate, in any country of the world individual and government both must take steps to curb this problem if we do not stop than the day will not so far a lots of disease could be generated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to another place for any purposes while this vehicles are creating numerous traffic ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ve time to go slowly every one in hurry thats why the reason is accident.However vehi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... hurry thats why the reason is accident.However vehicles are creating a lot of pollutio...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... hurry thats why the reason is accident.However vehicles are creating a lot of pollutio...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ies, For instance, in a city if someone make a parking place and that is too cheap c...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...o not stop than the day will not so far a lots of disease could be generated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87337662338 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52980837747 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555194805195 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.154962501 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288663171306 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110729249231 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903401361558 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158769884505 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289218820065 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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