In some countries more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found job. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages.
In this day and age, there is an increasing number of adults still living with their parents instead of having independent life after having graduated and got a job. Despite some obvious drawbacks, I believe that there are more advantages.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that moving in with parents has some negative effects. Firstly, parents may strip you of privacy or private space to do everything you want. In other words, if you are a freedom-loving person, you may have a quite hard time due to the fact that you are always under the control of parents. In addition, the old require a high level of silence so you often have difficulties in calling friends and having house parties.
On the other hand, I still think that it is better to go on staying with parents. The first reason is that you can save a lot of money from not paying the bills. By this way, you can spend a great amount of money buying which we dream of as an expensive car. The second reason is that it is unnecessary for you to take notice of household chores since your parents always give you a hand to do. For instance, if you are busy with your documentaries, there is no need to eat fast food which extremely do damage to your health because parents are always willing to take care of you.Another reason is that you should take responsibility for your parents when they are older. This means that they can get some troubles in normal day and it is obvious that they need a person to look after them. Needless to say, their children are the most suitable. moreover this is the best way to more understand your parents.
All in all, there is no doubt that there are some disadvantages of living with parents. However, I believe that the benefits of this trend does more good than harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47839506173 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43324806773 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.816863725 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253438642919 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867880604262 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648388854301 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18750607536 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846882927517 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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