In some countries , more and more people are becoming interested in finding about the histroy of the houses or bulidings they live.
what are the reasons for this ?
how can people research this?
The paragraph describes that, the people have became more keen to know about the back times of the residence they are currently living in. As we dig into the history of a house, the more interesting things can be about it. People could get know about this by surfing the internet and in various ways.
Residence wants to know about the old times of their home because of the activities that are currently happening. the paranormal incidents are rare in this time period, when an unusual accidents occur in a home people tend to fear of non-existing realm and gets curious to know about the history of the house they currently living. According to recent survey conducted by the "BBC" organization it has revealed that major percent of the individuals of the residence are absorbed to know the paranormal incidents that occurred before.
In this modern era grasping of an information is effortless due the presence of internet. people who live in a house could preceive history of their house in internet or by meeting the locals who have been in that area for a large period of time. The library in that area contains vast information of residence histories and blue prints. If such incident has happened before, vacating the house is perfect solution. In a research conducted by the "Christopher constructions" it has concluded that many residence has been built on the graveyards.
In conclusion, residence are curious to know about their house are due to some paranormal incidents and the could get the information on history of their house in internet, meeting locals and visiting libraries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ragraph describes that, the people have became more keen to know about the back times ...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ctivities that are currently happening. the paranormal incidents are rare in this t...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'accident'?
Suggestion: accident
...re in this time period, when an unusual accidents occur in a home people tend to fear of ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ffortless due the presence of internet. people who live in a house could preceive hist...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... who have been in that area for a large period of time. The library in that area contains vast...
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Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun residence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many residences'.
Suggestion: many residences
...nstructions' it has concluded that many residence has been built on the graveyards. In...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... meeting locals and visiting libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94497005654 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490706319703 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2565120875 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227650821062 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863835006944 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678082100087 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149135249068 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087979685544 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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