In some countries, more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?
Nowadays, there exists a rising tendency of people choosing to live alone in many countries. While this lifestyle certainly have many advantages, there are some huge drawback that should not be neglected.
The first and most obvious advantage of living alone is absolute freedom. By living alone, we can do whatever we want whenever we want, which is a special privilege that can hardly obtain otherwise. This kind of lifestyle can certainly be a efficient way to enhance one’s independence. As we live alone by ourselves, we are forced to learn to manage and balance every aspects of our lives. Though this process, a person can grow up substantially, become more responsible and reliable.
However, the downsides of living alone lie within its biggest advantage. Having total freedom, without any restrictions, can sometime leads our life to an disordered and undesirable state. This is particularly true for many youngsters, who are inexperienced and not good at discipline themselves. Because the lifestyle encourage a more closed and secretive life, they generally do not receive proper guidance and warnings for everyday matters. With this lack of advice, them prone to give in to temptation and easily lose sight of their goals.
To conclude, I agree that living alone provides a luxurious total freedom while also greatly help in one’s growth in adulthood. Nevertheless, I argue that this lifestyle is a positive way of living for everyone with considerable disadvantages.
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- In some countries, more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33755274262 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9933965673 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0870554318 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22378890488 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748950336586 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544781185118 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137942709103 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416995117313 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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