In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Different people have different views. Personly , I think all people are thinking about themselves nowadays. They are saying that present tense is tense which all have to help to themselves . Actually, now there is its own problem in every country. So, every country is thinking about them and they must think. If they don’t think their country will become bankrupt. But, they should think about other countries because if we don’t help one another who help us?
I want all people to resemble our people. Because we solved problems which was the worst. Our population is the population which devided into 40 parts raisin and eaten it. So, there is a sentence in our country “ If we are together we solve all problems”. I think we should not avoid helping other we should help one another. Supposing, a poor country needed to favor they hadn’t wealth to exchange for favor. Who would help them? I know it is difficult question. But life is difficult. So, we must help one another.
I do not think it is better to focus on own problem than helping other. In my opinion, we should focus on the world. We are not used to thinking about other. Because we think that “ I will be pleased if I am happy”. But it is not true. If we are happy we must help other. I think there are many sad people. If we are sad someone will help us.
In conclusion, if there is global problem in the world we should not avoid from helping other. So, I think if person does not help to person who helps to him. We should do good for others because it will come back to us in unexpected ways. It is my own opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41216216216 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30614808602 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5514464567 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.0344827586 106.682146367 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.2068965517 20.7667163134 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.06896551724 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211708644902 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658394731674 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705888555483 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146266222211 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127386372924 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 13.0946893788 34% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 50.2224549098 173% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 11.3001002004 33% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.82 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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