In some countries older people are being encouraged to work longer and not to retire. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement age.
In this modern world few nations are adapting new policy that boost senior citizens to work extra hours and not to take retirement. Definately there are both positive and negative side of this scenario and I will discuss bhot in this essay.
To start with, the merits of this situation. First and foremost, it save the time as well as the money of the authority. To elaborate, if, federation wants to recruite new employees then, a procedure must be followed; like, trainning, placement and so on. It not only request hug sum of money but also requested lots of time. Moreover, this process provide experience worker to work for more time period. It means that the productivity of the business will definitely increase due to the experience of the staff members; therefore, this idea is considered as a good thought.
However, it also have some demerits also. Firstly, employers will be depressed and stressed out. For instance, a normal person want to work until to a specific age or time period, onwards he or she wants to enjoy there life with there near and dear ones; constrastingly, under these circumstances individual get bound to work for there whole time without getting the opportunity to enjoy there life furthermore, they can not support this condition due to the age factory also. Hence, this process creat over pressure on the old age workers this creat unbalanced felling.
In conclusion, although, this scenario is helpful in saving precious time and funds of the government and because of this experience old age workers work and there knowledge play a hug role but, is also creat unsatisfying felling in the hearts of individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96762589928 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72439925994 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9428786848 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109842756495 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361748382559 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301924018671 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706925715101 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261432413219 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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