Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days, already all the population visit to other regions to enjoying. Some people think that this trip affects countries badly. I believe that travelling to any country for any people would provide great returns for people. I will elaborate on my opinion in further paragraphs.
In the world, there is a lot of county and nations and I believe that to be able to contact these nations is a considerable thing. Being a qualified human requires some properties and seeing new countries and cultures is one of these requirements. A person who has experienced many journeys to other countries would have more advantageous than others in terms of different things. For example,in 2018 I had travelled to Ireland for two months and I claim that this journey changed my perspective for many aspects. I cannot see any obstacle for that unless there is a bad intention.
On the other hands, in the 20th-century humanity faces many dangers like diseases, terrorism etc.Travelling to other countries should have an unwanted influence on the countries in these dangerous conditions. For instance,in early,2020 the world has encountered a deadly virus called Covid that caused many ramifications for all the world. It is inevitable to have undesirable consequences in these circumstances.
In conclusion, unless there are extraordinary bad conditions visiting other countries would not have a negative impact on the countries. On the contrary, I believe that it is very beneficial for each member of the countries and people should do these voyages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04692894568 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4575867611 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31247227302 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099730620608 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843353619994 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204376695128 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361992185489 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.