In this day and age, with the rapid development of science and technology, many people have an increasing tendency to go online shopping rather than shop in stores or boutiques. In my point of view, I believe that this trend brings both pros and cons.
On the one hand, with the utilitarian applications of the internet and its platforms, virtual shopping indeed has a variety of advantages. First of all, in this busy world where its citizens have become so restless, online shopping stands out to be a perfect way to purchase merchandise, from groceries to cosmetics. According to research conducted in 2023, the number of digital buyers is about 2.64 billion, making up 33.3% of the global population. In addition, numerous people assert that e-shops offer a wide diversity of goods and commodities, both domestic and international. With this convenience, a Vietnamese man can buy a T-shirt or a pair of pants from the UK, just with an additional delivery fee. It stands to reason that online shopping has shown its practical benefits during the covid-19 pandemic. Throughout the lockdown periods, I don’t at no time were people permitted to go out; however, essentials were still required to run a household. This led to a massive surge in cyber shopping that helped prevent the transmission of the virus among people.
On the other hand, electronic shopping can cause unwanted effects. Firstly, all buyers cannot be certain whether the retailers sell the products as they advertise. Many people report having been cheated to buy pirated and low-quality goods that copy almost the same as the authentic brands. Furthermore, e-commerce can be hazardous for customers because their personal information such as credit card numbers or names could be stolen. As a result, the purchasers’ identity could be in danger of illegal usage by hackers.
In conclusion, while i agreed that teleshopping brings various benefits to people in the modern era; however, there are some dangerous drawbacks of this trend that everyone, seller or buyer, should take into account.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...he lockdown periods, I don’t at no time were people permitted to go out; however, es...
^^^^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...age by hackers. In conclusion, while i agreed that teleshopping brings various...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16023738872 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8309258526 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640949554896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5681215514 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15740469467 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493508108205 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618281045666 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906731572411 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640286582632 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...he lockdown periods, I don’t at no time were people permitted to go out; however, es...
^^^^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...age by hackers. In conclusion, while i agreed that teleshopping brings various...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16023738872 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8309258526 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640949554896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5681215514 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15740469467 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493508108205 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618281045666 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906731572411 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640286582632 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.