In the modern era, more individuals consume carbohydrate drinks than ever. This essay will present several prominent reasons for this phenomenon, as well as giving effective methods that can be implemented to limit the consumption of sugary beverages.
To commence with, the prominent reason leading to the upward trend of people, predominantly youngsters, opting for carbohydrate beverages is that there is a variety of delectable sugary beverages available on the market for reasonable prices which people from almost every economic background can afford. In addition, they are diverse in types and flavors with resplendent colors for individuals to select, and most importantly, owing to several media campaigns, more people are conversant with many well-known soft drink brands such as Coca-Cola, Pepsi, and Panta, to name a few. In contrast, in the past, this type of beverage was not so prevalent among people because they were all similar and made from basic ingredients that did not, to some extent, provoke people’s appetite.
Excessive consumption of sugar-based drinks can pose detrimental threats to people’s overall health; therefore, several methods can be applied in order to reduce this phenomenon. Firstly, it is advisable and beneficial that the government heighten citizens’ awareness about the adverse effects of sugar-based drinks on their health. Some research indicates that consuming too many soft drinks can increase people’s incidence of diabetes, obesity, heart disease, tooth decay, and cavities. As a result, when being well informed about the deleterious impacts of sugary beverages on their health, citizens will eventually shift to healthier selection. Additionally, people should be encouraged to consume a wide range of fresh fruits as snacks in substitution for sugar-based drinks. Not only do scrumptious fruits provide a large number of healthy substances such as essential vitamins and fiber but they also accommodate people with adequate water to prevent dehydration and maintain a balanced metabolism.
In conclusion, because of several factors, sugar-based drinks are growing in popularity among individuals; however, several steps can be taken to curtail the use of sugary beverages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 821, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Not only do scrumptious fruits provide a large number of healthy substances such as essential vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70746268657 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98013621353 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614925373134 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0077090067 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364088617169 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132266473848 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813005024749 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216812829867 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691318873035 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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