In many cultures, people consider owning a private house the supreme purpose of their lives. To them, a house is a valuable asset which guarantees them and their next generations a dignified life. Personally, I think this positive idea will bring people more motivation to work and live, hence a more meaningful life.
It might be a catastrophe for many people when they are unable to settle their renting bills. Due to the consequences of financial difficulties and other reasons, any employee who principally relies on monthly incomes for his or her living expenses, can be rendered homeless. This potential risk, therefore, encourages people to build up their savings for possessing a house so that they can have a shelter during hard times. Besides, living in a private dwelling means that people have more freedom to enjoy their lives and raise their children without worrying about being forced out. Therefore, those preferring a stable life might find it crucial or livable to own a house, and they sometimes devote their time and efforts to reaching this goal.
A life is more meaningful, in my opinion, when people have a specific purpose to live for, as long as it is not harmful to others. Because buying a permanent accommodation, especially in urban areas, often costs a considerable amount of money, people need to be keen on working to make their dream come true. Not only does this motivate their lives, it also stimulates the development of the real estate market, and thus indirectly contributes to the national economy.
Overall, many people believe that having a house will give a safer and more stable life, both for them and their next generations, and I completely support this positive idea.
- Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Task 2 To succeed in a business one needs to know maths To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think technology makes life complex so we should make life simpler without using technology Do you agree or disagree Give reasons to your answer and provide examples from your knowledge Write at least 250 words 92
- In today s world private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages 67
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er during hard times. Besides, living in a private dwelling means that people hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01045296167 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68738034822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6012482173 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149189906803 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631168236011 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043478429401 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963263782197 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232576314375 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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