living in a country where you have to speak a foreign can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
In this concurrent world , it is undoubtedly true that speaking a foreign language can be problematic social for networking. Some people concur that a practical problem . However , I quibble from them and propound that speaking a foreign language can be maker of serious social dilemma.
Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantiate the concept of creating problem of speaking other language. The top-notch concrete reason is damaging own culture. Another rationale which hauls me to patron is lack interest for social interaction due to forcing to talk in other tongue . The rear most coherent factor to be considered which cannot be neglected is accuracy of that foreign language. To uphold my notion, I would quote an instance that people often feel shy to speak in other language in the consequence they will talk less which is prima facie testimony. Thus , it is clear that forcing to talk in a foreign language has certainly undeniable demerits.
What is half full for some , may appear half empty to others . So the public in general tend to distinguish that it causes practical problems which has multifarious reasons, To commence with , some people deem that expressing the thought would be a problem by speaking foreign language. Withal they also uphold that the most of people may also feel less confident to speak which may cause of not getting job as well.
In conclusion , I repeat that there are innumerable strong factors supporting in social problem. However its contrary can be overlooked or controlled. Consequently I firmly agree to the statement.
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...ntrary can be overlooked or controlled. Consequently I firmly agree to the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14901960784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80971510423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7225313662 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237732525924 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805236374749 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602215169328 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156893051455 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058304693869 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.