In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
how can we deal with those causes?
Needless to say that crimes wreak havoc not only on developed nations but also on third world countries which have led to a catastrophic scenario caused
by infinite reasons which conjoint to add insult to injury. This essay is going to outline the causes and solutions of increasing crimes before coming to the final conclusion.
To pint point the paramount causation behind increasing of crime is nothing but poverty. To comprehend this point ,here is a definitive illustration that due to poverty for the sake of their belly they are committing crimes such as stealing, killing. Another infamy root is unemployment which becomes unavoidable .To epitomize the current status ,we can say that the frustration and depression for being unemployed young generation often attempting crimes. Thus, due to above mentioned reasons the amount of crime is majorly affected.
We know totality that action speaks louder than words. There are colossal ways means to combat the harmful impact of the crime on this globe but onus in entirely on economic development. Another unquestionable panacea is making opportunities for fresher to work which is also one of the best resolutions to counter this peril by leaps and bounds. Furthermore, to counter the problem of crime is increasing , new rules can be set .For example many studies found that most of the country are not strict for giving punishment. Thus, if the above steps are taken appropriately this problem may find their solutions.
In conclusion ,this causes needs attention and expedite action to protect our planet from the increasing of crime amount. It is possible not by enforcing or by enacting the laws ,however ,it should be done by means of educating people about its nasty effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, third, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13732394366 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75402612467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2638320758 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244794309041 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839477282817 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673187453168 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134302239357 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107272344354 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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