veryone needs a proof over their heads, whislt some individuals prefer a rental place to live, others would like to have their ownership of their home. As an Asian woman, eventhough I have been renting apartments my entire aldulthood, one of my life goals is to soon have a home that I own and I do not think there is a negative affect about that decision.
Having lived in foreign countries for a considerable amount of time, I speak for my what I learnt and witnessed that most people,a part from the ones that have Asian heritage, does not consider owning a home their desire. The argue would be because they are satisfied with the way things are in their rental homes and nobody likes changing. In addition, even if they are not happy with the place, they can quickly move out and move on to the next place. However, this is not an option for home owners. Furthermore, buying a home is taking in extra financial burden plus more for maintaining it. From all that stated, I completed understand why some people does not wish to own a home.
On the other hand, individuals that looking to purchase a home of their own are the ones that prefer stability in life and are confident they can manage to run a home. Dispite the financial burden, owning home also comes with significant benefits financially and mentally. For instance, it is clear that many renters lost their home during the COVID-19 pandemic because they couldn’t afford the rent due to the mass unemployment followed the worldwide lockdown. This is not the case for home owners as they have ownerships on the house and no hassles with the landlords into the bargain. As I mentioned above, cultural diversity affects Asian mindsets as well, we believe that owning a place to call home is the foot of a prosperity life.
To conclude, while both views have persuasive reasons for why they would or would not want to own a home. I personally possitive that owning a home does not create any negativity in ones life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Veryone
veryone needs a proof over their heads, whislt ...
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Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... and I do not think there is a negative affect about that decision. Having lived in fore...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... I learnt and witnessed that most people,a part from the ones that have Asian heri...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ot consider owning a home their desire. The argue would be because they are satisfied wit...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...ould or would not want to own a home. I personally possitive that owning a home does not create any ...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... home does not create any negativity in ones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65340909091 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49741601998 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1189511296 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282092377277 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105080942483 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523056060658 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181922636935 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498651659172 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.