The bar chart below demonstrates the outcomes of a research about Australian citizens tea and coffee consumption habits in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in the last 4 weeks.
At the first glance, Australian residents in these cities prefer to have a sit-down tea or coffee outdoor in a café than to purchase instant or to-go ones. The proportions for this sector was recorded as over 60% in 3 cities Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart and over 55% for Brisbane, with Melbourne’s being the highest at 63%. Adelaide is the only exception of the previous statement as it is shown that half of it’s citizens favour instant coffee, the number of people enjoy having their brews in a café followed not far behind with 49%. This city also do not drinks these beverages as much as other cities in the survey.
The second choice for the cities’ residents was obviously instant caffein minus Adelaide as mentioned above, with Hobart at the top for nearly 55% and the lowest percentage was Sydney with just a little more than 45%.
It is safe to say that the locals in these cities are not appreciate to-go caffeins as much as thay are the others. Brisbane appears to be in the bottom of the list with under 35% of it’s native reported to have bought fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks. Sydney landed at the top of this list with approximately 43%.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...hart below demonstrates the outcomes of a research about Australian citizens tea and coffe...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...outcomes of a research about Australian citizens tea and coffee consumption habits in Sy...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its citizens'?
Suggestion: of its citizens
...ious statement as it is shown that half of it’s citizens favour instant coffee, the number of pe...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'drink'?
Suggestion: drink
... behind with 49%. This city also do not drinks these beverages as much as other cities...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...that the locals in these cities are not appreciate to-go caffeins as much as thay are the ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...preciate to-go caffeins as much as thay are the others. Brisbane appears to be in t...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its native'?
Suggestion: of its native
...n the bottom of the list with under 35% of it’s native reported to have bought fresh coffee in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75210084034 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49988701108 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3747182437 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13783303891 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625272937398 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059912633523 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917873785806 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06495954756 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...hart below demonstrates the outcomes of a research about Australian citizens tea and coffe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...outcomes of a research about Australian citizens tea and coffee consumption habits in Sy...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its citizens'?
Suggestion: of its citizens
...ious statement as it is shown that half of it’s citizens favour instant coffee, the number of pe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'drink'?
Suggestion: drink
... behind with 49%. This city also do not drinks these beverages as much as other cities...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...that the locals in these cities are not appreciate to-go caffeins as much as thay are the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...preciate to-go caffeins as much as thay are the others. Brisbane appears to be in t...
^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its native'?
Suggestion: of its native
...n the bottom of the list with under 35% of it’s native reported to have bought fresh coffee in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75210084034 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49988701108 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3747182437 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13783303891 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625272937398 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059912633523 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917873785806 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06495954756 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.