In some countries, owning the home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why may this be the case?
Do you think this is positive or negative?
In some countries, people prefer to have a home rather than renting one. They believe it is very significant in their countries. Despite many people who think it is negative, I claim it is positive because of its advantages.
Whether or not people bought the home is discussing. Some people living in specific countries claim that prices will increase while their incomes could not change in the future. They think the more home prices rise, the more renting prices increase, so they will have to pay more costs and have a hectic lifestyle, such as people living in third countries. Because of mired economic problems such as increasing the home and living prices, they think; if they do not buy a home, they will have no money to rent the house in the new future.
Although many adverse effects revolve around the issue, it could not be far-fetched to hold the view that it includes many advantages in some countries. Firstly, people think they invest their money by buying the home for the next generation. Secondly, they have to pay more money altogether; however, they will never have to pay a penny then. Finally, individuals who buy a home are not worried about the swelling in their countries.
In conclusion, because increasing the home price in some countries, and advantages outweigh disadvantages I strongly agree buying the home is worthwhile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is positive because of its advantages. Whether or not people bought the home is discus...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...is positive because of its advantages. Whether or not people bought the home is discussing. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90869565217 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59918920032 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2398832098 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195197873819 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914210238917 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715514017587 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138752645551 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677843546734 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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