In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
In recent years the trend has been changed towards renting a property. In few regions people prefer to buy their house instead of living on a rent. In the of course of the essay, I will describe the main factor and the impact to society.
Firstly, nowadays people are prefer to buy houses or accommodation because the rent of the property which they pay to landlord is equal to the amount of the mortgage which they pay to banks own the accommodation. This property after a period will transfer to their names while the rented land for living not their property it does matter how long the live there. In addition, if the bougth their house then they make any kind renovation according to requirement however on others houses they not able make any changes. For example, if have their house then redevelop according to their choice, on other hand, they will adjust to others desgin which develop on owner's preference.
Buying own house makes positive impact to community because one house fulfill generations need to live their, however on the rent people demand according to cutting edge era it means the house will lose their demands years while in own house people makes changes to their needs. If a house goes to generations it means people need less place to develop new houses. It also help to reduce pollution because to build house need to cut down trees and concrete which cause pollution. Renting house does not gives freedom to upgrade while it depends on owner. However, people care more their houses which make their life longer.
In conclusion, buying house is easy these days with help of banks, almost similar to rent amount pay for martgage, however it help to reduce pollution because peole live generation a house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o landlord is equal to the amount of the mortgage which they pay to banks own the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...djust to others desgin which develop on owners preference. Buying own house makes pos...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ss place to develop new houses. It also help to reduce pollution because to build ho...
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Message: Did you mean 'give'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: give
...cause pollution. Renting house does not gives freedom to upgrade while it depends on ...
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Suggestion: give
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31021644008 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9372750579 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930348383568 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380803379813 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296993738267 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605745551471 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132955868853 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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