In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In numerous nations, it is believed that being the sole owner of a house is more vital and practical than renting one. This consideration might come from the belief of some culture or the social pressure on labour. From my perspective, I think that this is a negative situation for the following reasons.
Initially, purchasing a personal house is extremely expensive. The price for a completed accommodation could consume people several years and efforts of working. It is a fact that costs for homing have never remained sustainably for hundreds of years, the more developments of society occur, the higher price for accommodation. A number of employees ought to work hard in their entire life in order to buy their own houses, some of them even could not buy for themselves a house in spite spending a lot of time being labouring.
On the other hand, pursuing the owning-a-house target could prevent people from investigating for other aims. If people decide to rent a house as well as spend money on self-improvement, their professional skills will be developed to gain more promoting opportunities, parallel with the accommodation purpose. As a result, not only having more experiences but these people saving a huge amount of money to investigate on other needs. On the contrary, people who choose to solely focus on making money for having-a-house aim instead of borrowing an accommodation economically may miss valuable chances to meet up-to-date requirements.
To summarize, it is apparently beneficial for people who decide to rent a house instead of being labouring to purchase accommodation. The belief that owning a house is the prior aim for a person should be eased as it brings a number of negative thoughts and pressure for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, may, so, well, i think, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12964931919 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6408147273 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247742943569 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917891876381 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575178977744 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167072840455 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076312270665 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.