In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays, houses and living places have become a controversial issue, when people believe that it is better to possess a private house rather than hiring an apartment. There are many driving forces for this situation, such as the value, the sense of freedom, or some social problems. From my standpoint, I consider that this choice has both advantages and disadvantages I will discuss in this essay.
People who make a decision to possess a house will have several justifiable explanations. First of all, the value of a house and its property are more precious than a renting one. For example, in my hometown, ancient houses which were built in the last century are priceless, because it is not simply an accommodation for living, but it conveys a spirit message from our ancestors and national traditions. Besides, the owner has a sense of independence, they can decorate or design their favorite house, while the person who hires the owner's house compromises not to destroy the apartment. Individuals and governments will less worry about social issues such as homeless whenever the contract is expired or renters can not afford the payment.
Owning a home can have positive as well as negative effects in some particular situations. On the one hand, the feeling of comfort and safety always exists if someone buys their private house. On the other hand, in some parts of the world, people hardly pay for such a large property. Renting a house is more suitable for low-income laborers and they can change the location flexibly with job demands.
In conclusion, possessing a house can bring lots of benefits including property and freedom. However, what I believe is the two side effects, may it be good or bad will depend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...are priceless, because it is not simply an accommodation for living, but it conveys a spirit mes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7132387814 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7595155965 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183036779703 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614784135247 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520618137812 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106267089165 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662103078508 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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