in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important. Why might this be a case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?
In various nations, housing possession seems to be valued over leasing. Some people consider purchasing a house is a great achievement. However, Some may not pay any attention to it. In my point of view, the importance of house's ownership depends on few factors.
It is obvious that many benefits that come with home ownership make it all worthwhile. Firstly, a home can be a good long-term investment. When you own a house, you are simultaneously in possession a real estate appreciation. In numerous countries, people attempt to afford a house by working assiduously because the escalation of land price may help them generate profit in the future. In addition, owning your own home means that there are tax benefits granted to you. You can also build equity in your home,which in turn, may act as a long-term savings account.
Secondly, being in possession of a home brings you the ultimate freedom. It enables you to renovate your own home without the landlord's management. Renovating and decorating their home in their own style are desirable prospect for some people. Moreover, if you own a home, you will likely have a stable life during the period of your retirement.
Despite of tremendous benefits of housing possession,the divergence of opinion seems to be expressed among the communities in some countries. They claim that purchasing a house is challenging,even unfeasible in some metropolises. Therefore, they tend to pay the monthly rent and opt for nomadic lifestyle. Some other tenants assume that homeowners will face with potential depreciation which tenants are not affected by. Leasing is some people's option, because it assists them to save money when the house needs to be repaired. Moreover, tenants can access to high-quality houses or apartments without investment costs.
In conclusion, though owning a home can come with many investment benefits and risks to some, it is my perspective that people should work diligently to afford a house due to its sustainable benefits for the long run
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16109422492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99180182048 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4495276363 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183536764218 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614624210592 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395625975183 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105692495408 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480368608842 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.