In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In many countries, young adults want to be homeowners instead of renting. I believe that there are multiple motivations for this aspiration, and this is a positive way of thinking.
There are various reasons behind this perspective and one of the primary reasons is that people do not want to depend on landlords. Landlords can increase rent at any time and they can interfere with the privacy of tenants. Tenants also are terminated from the rental contract and have to find a new place. Furthermore, people prefer owning a home to renting one because they can change the structure of their house, decorate and modify spaces to their desires. It is clear that tenants cannot do the same things when they rent a house or an apartment. For example, when a person chooses to rent an apartment, they cannot renovate and break down anything in this space.
Although there are both drawbacks and benefits to this trend, I believe that it is a positive situation. First, a house can be an investment in the future because real estate tends to increase its value over time. People can rely on this property to secure their lives when they retire without financial worries. For example, in Vietnam, the prices of houses increased significantly over 20 years, especially in big cities like Ho Chi Minh and Hanoi. Moreover, owning a home also helps to improve the mental health of owners. The sense of living in own house makes people feel comfortable and free.
In conclusion, people want to own a home rather than renting one because they want to have the legal rights to their property, independent of landlords and they can change and modify their houses in the way they want. I believe that this is a positive situation because it can be an investment and improve the owner’s mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...makes people feel comfortable and free. In conclusion, people want to own a home...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80258899676 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55147158059 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7735390163 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255550446216 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864050319116 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562795940553 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170858943901 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178082918002 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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