In many countries, many young adults set out to be homeowners by 30 years old, not opting for renting. I think there are multiple motivations for this aspiration, and this is a positive way of thinking.
One of the most important reasons why people do not want to rent houses or apartments is because they are dependent on landlords or potential roommates. Owning a home means you are in total control of how your house looks like, how many people it hosts, or even how many utilities it uses. Landlords can also throw people out at any moment during their rent or, in many cases, can break into tenants’ space at their convenience. Moreover, owning a home also means an elevated social status. You are now considered a functional, successful, responsible adult. For most men, you are also considered a better candidate for marriage because you are now ready to welcome a new family into your home.
I think, generally, this is a positive development for individuals. Switching from a rented property to an owned home benefits individuals financially. Because tenants depend on landlords to control the rent, they usually waste more money renting a place for a long time than owning one. Owned houses are also an investment as many houses can gain value over the time that owners stay there. For example, houses in Go Vap District now triple in value compared to what they used to be a decade ago. Another reason why people want to be a homeowner is due to the positive correlation between owning a home and better mental health. Owning a home usually means a sign that adults have made it in their lives, which in turn eases the mind of adults. For some, home-owning even means increased privacy.
In conclusion, wanting independence from landlords and elevating their social status are reasons people want to own a home. I think this is generally a positive development because it can be a future investment, while also easing individuals’ minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85671641791 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72043331236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7713508819 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337384926912 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112101739027 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676334352317 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208329746298 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473578265163 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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