Living in the 21st century, the topic of owning a house vs renting has been as heated as ever. However, most people seem to go with the notion that buying a house is of immense importance and this could be due to a variety of reasons.
To begin with, owning an apartment in this modern world of ours gives its’ owner a sense of security, where they are able to rest their heads knowing that no houselord with an authority could get them out. In addition, when you own a house you have the right to decorate and furnish it however way you please, while this is not the case with rentals. Furthermore, people think that buying a house gives them a some sort of prestigious social status over renting one.
In my opinion, I view this situation as being negative on a number of aspects. First off, the costs and debts associated with owning a house out-weight that of renting one by a great deal. It happens upon many occasions that we see owners suffer from being drenched in loans for years trying to pay for a house that they bought. When buying a home you become entitled and restricted to a certain city or place, while renting provides you with the freedom and flexibility to move out to another place whenever you want with no strings attached.
Judging by my own experience, I used to live abroad with my family for almost 18 years, and all those years were spent under a rented house. This gave us the opportunity to move out several times whenever my father had a better job offer in the country where we lived. That certainly would not have been possible had we bought instead of renting a house.
To conclude, It is about time that people start looking at renting apartments differently and actually give it credit for all the advantages that it offers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, in addition, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53271028037 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3549217786 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7773388551 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258772120224 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923495157072 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350815811555 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138400176208 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403777601056 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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