Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In a world where kids spend most of their times on their phones, a small fraction of their schedule is actually left for physical activities. This lead to people believing that its integral to add physical education classes as a school subject while on the opposing side others think that it would be time wasting
Those in favor of adding physical education argue that such classes would help children be more active and keep their health on track, especially in todays world of not so healthy diet. Physical education classes might also provide kids with extra insights as to how certain games are played which might in turn help widen their horizons and convince them to peruse carers that has to do with sports
On the contrary, others think that academic subject classes are superior to that of physical education since they help students grow in terms of scientific knowledge, this would in turn lead them to get high scores that would allow from them to enroll in universities highly honored. Furthermore, it is also believed that it is not the schools responsibility to enhance the students’ health through physical education but rather the parents.
To conclude, I agree with the notion that its important for schools to adopt such physical education classes. Simply because children spend most of their day at school learning subjects that require a great deal of concentration. Having students take a break to take part in physical activities could enhance their abilities to concentrate and hence be able to comprehend their academic subjects more efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09230769231 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59396203774 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.039415935 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.142857143 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245210359221 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115789776666 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558416668099 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154867664116 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314558300925 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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