Now-a-days the trend of buying the second-hand goods has been increased significantly.Experts throughout the world have expressed their thoughts in this regard. This essay will disscus both the positive and negitive aspects of this practice along with various examples which will support the argument.
To begin with,in the progressive world of modern civilisation people do have certain aspirations to lead a luxurious life. But the major chunk of the society belongs to the middle class category. These people depend on their small wages to make their both ends meet. Consequently to fulfil their urge of leading a fancy life they prefer to but second-hand products in comparison to the first-hand version of the same thing.
Moreover, by adopting such practice, they contribute to prevent the issue of excessive waste generation to a certain level.In addition to that,second-hand products are cheaper as compared to new ones.Hence a buyer could save sufficient amount of money and this money can be utilised for some other useful purposes. It was stated in one of the articles of Times of India that a buyer could save 30% of his yearly income by investing his money on second-hand products instead of new items.
On the other hand, sometimes it is not advisible to give more preferance to second-hand products over new products beacuse there are few risks associated with it.Person might face some legal actions due to lack of documentation or if that second-handed product was used in a criminal activity by its previous owner.Hence buyer should properly investigate all the documentation and history of second-hand item before buying it.
In the essence of above mentioned points, it is evident that although second-hand products are bit cheaper than new items but one should aware of all the risks associated before adopting the practice of buying anything from anyone.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22847682119 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96931258793 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.092387926 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.9 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26523152495 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892236262227 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570055324823 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132405017027 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438691237088 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Experts
... goods has been increased significantly.Experts throughout the world have expressed the...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ill support the argument. To begin with,in the progressive world of modern civilis...
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Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...all wages to make their both ends meet. Consequently to fulfil their urge of leading a fancy...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ive waste generation to a certain level.In addition to that,second-hand products a...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , second-hand
...n to a certain level.In addition to that,second-hand products are cheaper as compared to new...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
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...o that,second-hand products are cheaper as compared to new ones.Hence a buyer coul...
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Suggestion: Hence
...cts are cheaper as compared to new ones.Hence a buyer could save sufficient amount of...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...cts are cheaper as compared to new ones.Hence a buyer could save sufficient amount of...
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Suggestion: Person
... there are few risks associated with it.Person might face some legal actions due to la...
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Suggestion: Hence
...criminal activity by its previous owner.Hence buyer should properly investigate all t...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...criminal activity by its previous owner.Hence buyer should properly investigate all t...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... that although second-hand products are bit cheaper than new items but one should a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22847682119 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96931258793 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.092387926 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.9 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26523152495 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892236262227 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570055324823 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132405017027 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438691237088 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.