In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development
n our modern ages and years, there is growing concern over the time that is spent on working . It is irrefutable that there are some reasons for which lead people take more time at work. From my own perspective, this phenomena has both advantages and disadvantages.
Despite the fact that each person has their own reasons why they use longer time for working, there are two fundamental factors which cause this phenomena. One of the most essential things can make people spend time on working is the living-standard which means the more people contribute to work, the more income they can earn. In other word, if people have more time to focus on work efficiently, they can have worthy money to raise their family. In addition, in some cases, an amount of work is extravagant, which is the reason why nowadays some people spends longer hours on working. Having been completed before deadline, work amount force some people to stay working from the morning until night . Personally, these two factors are prevailed people's time of work.
Moving on to another side, spending more time on working can brings some positive in many aspects. It is indisputable that business may develop significantly with the time employee contribute to work . Furthermore, nation 's economy may undergo significant development if every citizens have the same mind of working harder .
Although there are some benefits, in some cases this phenomena will be criticized as negative development for some reasons : the pressure employees suffer from is unacceptable and the things the receive is not adequate for everything they contribute.
In conclusion , nowadays, with modern mind and lifestyle, people decide to take time to work and this phenomena is need to be considered as both negative and the opposite side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72800089606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3323572286 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316956677126 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118418488511 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603431125105 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171031856365 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363573881885 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.