In some countries, small town-center shops atr going out o business because peope tenf to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores and this may result in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantagesof this change outweigh its advantage.
There is no denial that people in moderns day bypass small shops locating in the center and drive a considerable distance to large stores out of the main town. This circumstance leads to several profound impacts in citizen’s lives. This trend is responsible for the rise in number of cars being used. It is my firm conviction that this tendency brings about more demerits than advantages, which I demonstrate in this essay.
On the one hand, there are obvious benefits stem from the trend of choosing large out-of-town stores. First of all, the primary advantage is that it plays an important role in avoiding traffic jam in crowded city centers. It is common knowledge that large centers are places which gather exclusive restaurants, popular amusement parks as well as commuters. For instance, a vibrant city such as London have experienced a significant modification in the amount of citizens gather in the centers. Moreover, compared to small shops, larger stores purchase a diversity of products as well as high quality so that they attract more customers.
At the same time, the demerits also arise when people are in favour of large stores far away in the suburbs and ignore shops in the centers. First of all, city center become deserted since people no longer visit there. This situation pose a threat to the area’s security because without job, there would be a rise in lawbreakers who can commit serious offences. This place would be a breeding ground of evil and poverty when unemployment becomes usual, without customers by no means business of stores can be successful. In addition, people suffer from poverty can not access to stores located far away there resident area and without vehicle such as car there is no chance for them to access such stores. Last but not least, this trend contributes to the rise of vehicle which results in carbon footprint and put a jeorpady to environment.
In conclusion, although large out-of-town stores can prevents congestions however, the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'poses'.
Suggestion: poses
...e no longer visit there. This situation pose a threat to the area's security be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05899705015 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70669181726 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2147300965 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276843618511 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817919587289 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781412222238 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171837127415 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378046698718 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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