In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In many nations, small town-center stores are facing bankruptcy since customers are favoring large out-of-town shops. This might lead to an increase in the usage of automobiles , as people who do not own a car must find ways to travel. In my opinion, these trends bring more drawbacks than benefits.
On the one hand, there are two advantages of these developments. First, the preference of customers for out-of-town shops encourages economic growth in rural areas. Indeed, many malls anđ shopping outlets have been constructed in small towns across the U.S, and therefore have created millions of job opportunities for local people in these towns. In addition, an increase in the use of cars helps to strengthens national economy. For example, a new Vietnamese car company named Vìnfast has recorded impressive sales since 2018 thanks to the rising demand from customers, which not only benefits the GDP of Vietnam but also promotes local brands.
Beneficial as it is, this trenđđcauses several problems. To begin with, when there are more cars on the streets, more emissions are released into the atmosphere . For instance, the rate of pollution in Hanoi has recently reached an alarming level, and one of the main contributors is the increasing amount of exhaust fumes from automobiles, making people more vulnerable to health issues, such as lung cancer . Additionally, many town-centre shops going out of business will lead to a massive job loss. People who lose their jobs will struggle to cover the costs of living in the city, and therefore likely to suffer from mental issues like depression.
In conclusion, although I agree that an increase in the use of cars and customers’ preference for out-of-town stores are advantageous to a certain extent, I believe these developments do more harm than good for the above arguments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'strengthen'.
Suggestion: strengthen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20469798658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90729376534 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.731570999 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287867268568 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937189012992 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862875752097 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180904242688 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288950298566 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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