In some countries, some criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the development of the electricity technology, almost every family own a TV to watch news or programs. Whether the criminal trials can be seen on TV or not has sparked a hot discussion, some people think it has some benefits but others concern about the disadvantage. In my opinion, the advantages overweigh the disadvantage.
It can reduce the percentage of committing crime. People can learn the cost of breaking the law from the TV program which show and demonstrate the criminal trial, which would let the people who have the willing to do the dangerous things like robbing, driving after drinking and some others to be hesitated. They could consider how they will be treated after this and give up which will let fewer people to take the road of being criminal. Besides, the cases showed on the TV could be typical, it can let people who want to become a lawyer to have more chance to learn how the real court is and what they can or should say and do on it, that would be helpful.
Some people may have the opinion that it would offence the privacy of the criminals, but it could be solved by using some methods. The producer of that program can ask the criminal whether they can accept this, if not, they can use the technology approach such as changing their tuning of the voice and using something to mask their face or let the camera always face to the stuffs. Except that, harming to the teenager is also considered as a disadvantage, but it would not happen because the what the program concern is the trial but not the process of doing harm to the society.
All in all, showing the criminal trials on TV not only can let fewer people to break the law but also have the meaning of education, while the disadvantages could be prevented. So the advantages absolutely overweigh the disadvantages.
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- In some countries some criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62345679012 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54885206566 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5305292448 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24841916549 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968674969001 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654651805624 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172360948739 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505016790035 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.