In this day and age, old kind of music such as classical is decreased in the number of listeners and performers than it was calculated last 50 years. This phenomenon has brought to public attraction and it is recorded that more and more people pay attention to different kinds of music these days. As far as I am concerned, this dilemma has some specific reasons but it is pointless to encourage the young.
This essay will begin with the reasons to explain why young generations refuse to listen classical music. First of all, it can be true to confirm that the development of music also has an effect to this issue, especially the added more types of music such as pop or rock. For instance, there are many impressive pop disks around the world at the moment with both excited and depressed melody that suit young population. Thus, there is nothing that is hard to understand a decline in classical listeners. Next, there might be an issue that when children is on the way being mature, parents provide them an information that old music is only for old citizens and friends ought to judge you if you play classical ones when you are an adolescent. Hence, an increase in young music has a detrimental impact on historical melody and lyrics.
However, persuading kids to play classical music is unecessary and unsignificant. Firstly, every children have their own favorite kind of music and adults definitely cannot compulse them to adjust because of parents' interests. Furthermore, the music interest of children also depicts that kid's behavior and indeed the mental problems. To be more specific, vulnerable children tends to hear bad mood music and in contrast, energetic ones prefer to perform rock or hip-hop ones and it also rely on their emotions. Hence, it is basically an opportunity for parents to understand deeper their offsprings. So, as I mentioned, moms and dads should let their kids choose to play what they love and freely decide what they fascinate about.
To summarize, due to the enlisted reasons, my perspective goes with the idea that individual's music interest is not count on other's judgement. Despite the decline in classical perfomances, it is not a crucial pattern that have to solve by public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67911582423 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558201058201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5146155782 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377626671699 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107095477612 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715292655692 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199896417996 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897240540993 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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