People are facing the dilemma between the penalty for criminals, which is punish them by living in a jail or educate about public rules and laws. While there are many agree with the latter one, my perspective goes with the former and also the traditional solution. This essay will elaborate my own viewpoint to ensure that education is unadequate.
On the one side of the argument, there are severa; reasons related to the modern solution that might attract modern people in nowadays life. To begin, it is said that the original of crimes is lack of education from parents and schools, so teaching criminals as a penalty can definitely reduce the number of crimes. such as kidnap. Furthermore, people believe that no one is perfect and everyone cannot live without making mistakes. Hence, the society should make the opportunity for mistakers can gain knowledge about laws and change their minds and actions. By doing that, there will be more mature adults and people can live in a secure atmosphere.
However, I refuse the enlisted opinion and completely agree with the prison solution. I speculate this due to the fact that when criminals are prisoned, it means that they are living under laws and it will boost the changing characteristics process. For instance, many Vietnamese criminals after several years living in jails, they changed their way of thinking and become a positive person when finishing their prison time. Moreover, the authorities should put person with negative actions that make an adverse impact on ctiiziens into jails because inside that place, criminals not only have to do manual labor in order to reduce their terms but also think about what they have done in the past and make decisions for a better life. Last but not least, prisoners are served food and drinks regularly during their period so it is no doubt about their physical health.
To summarize, I strongly believe that the government should not change the solution in punishing criminals due to my enlisted reasons. As far as I am concerned, if the rules are more serious in the future, the crimes rate can be reduced with a positive number and city dwellers can live in a safe environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'punished'.
Suggestion: punished
...een the penalty for criminals, which is punish them by living in a jail or educate abo...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...lution that might attract modern people in nowadays life. To begin, it is said that the ori...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...definitely reduce the number of crimes. such as kidnap. Furthermore, people believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93766937669 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50510601434 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558265582656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7208970928 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150635033506 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485551339517 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348292535362 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925612627714 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130516079533 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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