In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, it is a common sight to see many people want their first child when they are older. It is true that many people choose career development when they are younger and give birth when they are older. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of reasons why people want their first child when they are older is so popular and some of challenges to be overcome.
On the one hand, the option to have children later in their life can exert many positive effects. Firstly, they choose enjoy life when they are young. This could be explained by the fact that they are hang out is easier when they don't have a baby and they can live with dreams. Secondly, they have time to prepare about money and knowledge. This is mainly due to is most people will have a steady income and a savings when they are older. And they have more time to learn about take care of a baby.
Nevertheless, I believe that this trend may carry a certain degree of risk. The first drawback relates to health. This is because giving birth at an older age causes the mother to have many health problems before and after give birth and the baby will to face with physical health problems. The second cons relates to the generation gap. As a result, the age gap between parents and childs are too big because differences of opinions.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why many people prefer to have children late in their life. The pros of the enjoy life when they are young and with a steady income. While, the cons of health and generation gap. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...der. It is true that many people choose career development when they are younger and g...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to deciding to do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of reasons why people...
^
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
... do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of reasons why people want their first child when ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the challenges') or simply say ''some challenges''.
Suggestion: some of the challenges; some challenges
...d when they are older is so popular and some of challenges to be overcome. On the one hand, th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to enjoy'
Suggestion: to enjoy
... positive effects. Firstly, they choose enjoy life when they are young. This could be...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t they are hang out is easier when they dont have a baby and they can live with drea...
^^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'relate'.
Suggestion: relate
...ysical health problems. The second cons relates to the generation gap. As a result, the...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hildren late in their life. The pros of the enjoy life when they are young and with a ste...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owth eventually outweigh any negatives.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51633986928 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16636843737 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8446942415 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409867025241 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121851592484 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954816767641 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246630770124 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129965033034 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...der. It is true that many people choose career development when they are younger and g...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to deciding to do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of reasons why people...
^
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
... do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of reasons why people want their first child when ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the challenges') or simply say ''some challenges''.
Suggestion: some of the challenges; some challenges
...d when they are older is so popular and some of challenges to be overcome. On the one hand, th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to enjoy'
Suggestion: to enjoy
... positive effects. Firstly, they choose enjoy life when they are young. This could be...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t they are hang out is easier when they dont have a baby and they can live with drea...
^^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'relate'.
Suggestion: relate
...ysical health problems. The second cons relates to the generation gap. As a result, the...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hildren late in their life. The pros of the enjoy life when they are young and with a ste...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owth eventually outweigh any negatives.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51633986928 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16636843737 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8446942415 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409867025241 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121851592484 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954816767641 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246630770124 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129965033034 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.