What are the advantages and disadvantages to study abroad?
Nowadays, students can study abroad to expand their knowledge while in the past they were just studying in their own country. Studying abroad is a way to help them have many opportunities to see the world. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why study abroad is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
On the one hand, the option to study abroad can exert many positive effects. The first advantage is that education gives people knowledge and skills that are the base which help them earn a well-paid job. From that they can contribute positively to society because schools aim to teach young people moral values such as tolerance and sharing. Other advantages of are living abroad is that it can broaden student’s’ horizons that help them be exposed to different cultures and customs. They can become more independent such as being responsible for cooking, cleaning and paying bills. Due to this, more and more students want to attend a prestigious university to acquire a valuable knowledge abroad.
Nevertheless, I believe that practice may carry a certain degree of risk. This is because living and studying abroad can be difficult, which leads to some problems related to about paperwork such as visa applications. Furthermore , the language barrier will struggle to find accommodation and pay bills. It's challenging when living alone in an unfamiliar culture can cause homesickness.
Nowadays, studying overseas is one of the choices of parents and students. It has some positives like students are learnt in national education and have been exposed to different cultures and customs of the world. However, it has a quiet negative such as the language barrier that will be difficult to live or study abroad. Besides, culture shock can cause nostalgia. Although, I believe the benefits in terms of studying abroad eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17027863777 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93236516009 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1357164036 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8947368421 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236917870186 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718078896499 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713877178568 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15565591025 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558278857752 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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